Feedback received from 5th seminar..
On The Animation Visuals
- The animation backgrounds, elements, characters and transitions between the scenes seem to work in general.
- Be careful about being realistic in terms of the visuals that have been illustrated. For example, the part where the anthill is growing next to the pavement on the road is unrealistic.
- The current narrative works for and creating the visual part of the animation. But when it comes to telling a story, it is bland.
- Need to add drama and a lot more flavor to the tone and the narrative itself. The quality of the narrative must be brought up to the level of the visuals. Think of creative ways to tell a story that has richness in it and is quirky.
- Simultaneously work with visuals as well as sound to get your timing right.
- As of now, the visuals and voiceover are not in sync. Start working with audio and video together and not treat them as separate elements of the animation film.