Wednesday, October 2, 2013
Change In Narrative
The narrative I was working with till now was fine in terms of content. But in terms of story-telling, it completely lacked richness. It was a narration of plain facts. In order to make my voiceover sound as interesting as the visuals, I had to work of the narrative and make it quirkier than before.
I started thinking about various approaches I could use to tell a story. Something that would possible give the person speaking some character. I initially came up with two ways of doing this..
I started thinking about various approaches I could use to tell a story. Something that would possible give the person speaking some character. I initially came up with two ways of doing this..
- The Curious Kid
The whole narrative is based on the voice-over being curious. He doesn't really know much about ants and keeps on asking himself questions. But he slowly discovers new things about ants as he keeps on observing them. By the end of it (the animation), he becomes so fascinated by ants that he wants to know about more creatures like ants, that exist around him. - The Know All
This kid already know things about ants. He just happens to see a few ants in his backyard and begins observing them, and while doing so, he keeps on talking about what they are doing.
Of the two, the first one seemed much more interesting, since it would establish a connection between the curious kid, and the kid watching the animation, where both of them don't know much about ants.
But the problem with this idea was that there a few things that you can't learn just by looking at ants and what they are doing. You need to have some kind of prior knowledge to understand what is happening.
This is when I remembered something that was discussed in one of the previous seminars. It was about how kids tend to have a role model, somebody they always look up to at a young age. And most times, this person is just a few years older than them. This is when I thought that I could blend both the ideas of - the curious kid, and the one who already knows things about ants to effectively create a narrative that takes you through the animation.
Here is the narrative, where the curious kid is the one asking most of the questions and the older kid, who has some knowledge about ants, is the one with the answers..
- “Oops!” (Drops an eaten apple to the ground)
- “Hey, don’t pick it up.”
- “But I haven’t finished eating it.”
- “That’s okay, we can go get another one.”
- “Oh, okay.. Hey look, ants! I think they are trying to eat the apple. But do ants even eat apples?”
- “Yeah, of course. Ants eat just about anything. It’s safe to say that most of them have a sweet-tooth. They love eating anything that’s sweet and sugary, just like this juicy apple.”
- “Hey, look at that one. Is it carrying an apple seed? Do they eat seeds too?”
- “Well, most ants don’t eat the whole seed. They eat the seat-coat and other nutritious food attached to it. But I wonder what happens to the rest of the seed. Hmm. Anyway, seems like the ants are heading towards their anthill. Let’s have a look at what’s going on in there. There it is, the ant colony. Home of the ants.”
- “Woah, look at that all those ants! They’re all so busy doing.. doing things?!?! What are they doing in there?”
- “Well, most times, the ants spend their time collecting food, storing it here in the anthill. They also take care of the ant eggs laid by the queen. There she is. Her majesty, the queen ant. Mother of all ants of the colony”
- “Queen ant? But if she’s the queen, why doesn’t she have a crown?”
- “She doesn’t have a crown because she doesn’t need one. She’s got wings!”
- “Hey, look! There’s the apple seed from before.”
- “Yeah, and the ant seems to be carrying it out of the anthill. Better keep an eye on that seed!”
- “What does the ant do with the seed? It looks so much heavier than the ant itself”
- “Yes it is but ants can effortlessly carry more than 20 times their own weight. As for the seeds ants eat whatever they can, and move the rest of them outside the anthill. And those seeds later grow into new plants.”
- “These tiny little ants do all of that? That’s amazing! Are there any other creatures that are as incredible as ants?”
- “Yeah, of course. There are so many, like bees, butterflies, dragonflies, earthworms and even spiders.”
- “But where do I find them?”
- “That’s simple. They’re everywhere. You can find them this park, in your backyard, your balcony and even around your neighborhood garden. All you need to do is take a closer look.”
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