Feedback Received From 3rd Seminar
Presentation
- Needs to be more interesting
- Needs to have design process
- Must get more involved with the project
- Needs more energy
Animation
- The writing needs to be better, funnier
- Leave some stuff for the audience to figure out
- Make the visuals different from the text
- Work on character design
- More than one 30 second animation can be done
- Information is too generic
- Stress on empathy and the character of the ant
- Create connections with the viewer and the ant
- The frames tell a story, but look at the order of the narrative
- Study more about the age group
Next Steps
- There need to be a lot more iterations
- Really need to work faster and have more to show in terms of outcome
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